Thursday, 9 February 2012

Interesting things happening

This is my blog and so I'm going to start with some bragging.
I like to enter competitions from time to time and I've had some success in the past. Last October(ish) I entered a competition called Poetry Rivals. Nothing happened and so I then forgot about it.
Two days ago I arrived home to find a parcel on my doormat containing three copies of a book, my poem beaming up at me from the pages. I have to say right now that I don't think that the poem is that good but it's published so who cares.
Then yesterday I got a letter through the post, telling me that fifty of the poets published in the book are invited to an event in April, where they get to read their poem in front of a panel of judges. And the best one wins a laptop.
So, yeah, published and in with the chance of a laptop. I'm pretty happy.
Well while I'm here I might as well go over what else is happening in my life. Basically, I'm coming to the end of school and realising that I'm about to be spat into the real world. As such I'm going haywire on revision and also entering every competition I can find, mostly because I'm too lazy to get a real job. So you won't be hearing from me until halfway through June at the very least. Unless I win some of the aforesaid competitions. In which case I'll be right on here to brag about it.

Monday, 2 January 2012

Charred

“Do you remember what it used to be like?” the old man asked. “Do you remember what it was like before the Searing?”
Roamin looked round and swore. “Do you really think that this is the time?”
The old man ignored him and carried on talking. “I remember what it was like. Sometimes it’s all I can think about.”
Roamin swore again and turned back to his men. The remnants of his squad hadn't paid any attention to the man. They were all busy barricading the doors to this shrine in the vain hope of keeping the beasts out for a little while longer.
It had all begun as just a routine patrolling mission. All they'd had to do was forage into Charr lands. Just check on the Charr's troop placement, make sure they weren't about to attack and maybe grab some supplies if possible. Then they’d seen this Charr camp and the old man who was being held prisoner. They had all known that they had to act. They all knew what Charr did to prisoners. And it had been a small camp after all. There weren’t that many people there.
Of course they didn’t know at that point that most were out on patrol.
They’d just freed the old man when the rest on the Charr had returned to camp. They’d had no idea that they were coming and the first they knew of them was when they’d crashed into their flank. They’d been out manoeuvred and outnumbered. All they could do was retreat back to this shrine. Now they were trapped here and the old man wouldn’t shut up.
“I remember it all. All of it. Do you?”
Roamin had just turned round to tell the old man to shut it when he stopped. The man was waving his hands about and a picture was forming. Roamin knew magic when he saw it.
“The fields were emerald green, and when the wind blew they would ripple like a pond. Children used to run and play in them. I used to run and play in them.”
The picture showed just that. Green grass with laughing children running everywhere. The look in their eyes was that of pure joy. Roamin, for whom this was just a distant memory, was quiet.
The old man continued, “The rivers used to lie like dropped ribbons and were a deep dark blue. In the evenings after work we’d all go down there and fish.” The picture changed again. This time it showed late afternoon, just after nightfall. There were small groups of people all along the bank, laughing and talking together. As the light began to fade they lit paper lanterns and floated them on the river.
“In the east the snow-capped mountains rose to challenge the sky. It was a peaceful place. That was where I went to learn.”
Again the picture changed. A snowy landscape stretched away into the distance. A tower rose in front of them, like a beached ship, green with age. A group of people were gathered around it, young students in billowing cloaks. One stood out from the rest, a pretty girl with blond hair, bright green eyes and a smiling face.
“That was where I fell in love.”
The scene changed again. This time it showed a city made out of white stone and behind it a great wall that stretched right across the picture. The sun was rising over the top of it and seemed to make everything glow with an almost holy brilliance. “Then there was the great city of Ascalon. A bastion of strength and hope. There was where I lived for years, where I married my sweet Valia.” The picture showed a shrine and the girl with green eyes in a white wedding gown, still smiling. The big wall was still visible in the background. “I had children there. I was happy. “The Great Northern Wall behind Ascalon stretched from the Blazeridge Mountains in the east to the Shiverpeaks in the west, cutting off our kingdom from the North. It was thought to be impregnable.
“Then the Charr came.”
The picture clearly showed a massed army of Charr, the large hairy beasts that looked more cat then man. It showed them launching attacks but always being repulsed. Apparently the old man had been in the front line.
“The Wall held strong. The first appearance of the Charr had shocked us but now we grew confident again. They couldn’t get pasted the Wall. They couldn’t hurt us.
“That was our mistake.”
The picture changed, showing a great gathering of Charr arranged in circles around some sort of bonfire.
“They prepared a great weapon, I don’t know how. That was when this once fair kingdom burned.”
The pictures changed from peaceful ones to horrific ones. Great crystals falling from the sky and smashing buildings to rubble. Fire consuming everything. People running for their lives. “It was chaos. Everyone was running. None of us in the Guards stayed. We all had loved ones. We all ran.
“I hurried through the streets bumping into people. Our house had been on a hill close to the Wall. It took me ages to get there, fighting against the flow of people while over head the crystals and fire still flew. I finally got there. I was too late.”
Another picture formed, a house with a jagged crystal smashed through the roof.
“I knew that I was already too late but still I searched. I searched and all across the kingdom the fields burned, the rivers boiled, the mountains were smashed to rubble. People were crying and dying and still I searched.
“The bloody red sun had set on the landscape when I found them. They were all dead.”
The images still formed, though they were now blurred, as though the old man was looking through water. It showed the girl, now a woman, her hair matted with blood that had flowed through a hole in the back of her head. She was clutching the bodies of two small children in her arms. A third lay a distance away. The first two were dead but the third one stirred slightly.
“One of my sons still lived. That brought brief light into my life. But that light was soon extinguished. He’d inhaled too much smoke. He died shortly before dawn.”
The image changed again. This time it showed four freshly filled graves.
“My life was now filled with blackness. I didn’t have anything left to live for. But I climbed to the top of the hill to see what was left of the kingdom that I’d loved.”
The picture changed for the final time. Now it showed the landscape that Roamin was familiar with. Black, scorched ground. Hills where there hadn’t been before. Deep furrows gouged into the earth.
“My kingdom, my home had burned. My family were all dead, consumed by the same fire that had taken everything from me.”
The image faded away and left the men in stunned silence. Many were crying. But underneath them all was the sound of death. The Charr were breaking in.
Roamin swore and turned to face them, tears running down his face, his sword drawn, determined to sell his life, to kill the monsters who’d done this. Behind him the old man still spoke.
“They took everything from me. And all they left behind them was death. I hate them. I hate them!”
The door fell and Roamin saw them looking through, their furry lips held back in a snarl. Then the old man pushed in front of him. There was a mad fury in his eyes. “By fire they burned! And by fire they will burn.”
The old man thrust out his hands in front of him and fire gushed from them, burning everything before it, making flesh bubble and melt. The Charr tried to run but none escaped the terrible wrath of the fire wizard. The pyromancer took them all.
Roamin stepped carefully through the door and looked around. The Charr were all gone. All that was left was piles of ashes, showing the occasional sickening glisten of bone.
Roamin turned round to thank the old man, to say something, anything, about his home, his family and about what they both had lost.
But he was too late. The old man was already dead.

Yay. We're all going to die

Or in other words, happy New Year. It's 2012 and will the world end? Who knows.
Right, so the story I'm putting up now I actually wrote a few years ago while waiting for a plane in an airport. It's based in the Guild Wars universe and signal a small change in the way I'm going to be doing things. What I'm going to do with it is put it up here and also on some other websites, ones actually dedicated to the game. Hopefully that should generate more interest. I'm also going to do something else with it but that applies to the secret project that I've been babbling on about for ages and should now be coming to light. Well, we'll see.

Saturday, 31 December 2011

The House of Silk by Anthony Horowitz - A Review

A few years ago I got the complete works of Sherlock Holmes by Arthur Conan Doyle for Christmas and spent a pleasurable few weeks reading through them all.There was even included a short novel of stories about Sherlock Holmes that had been done by other authors. They were ok but I can't say I was ever really struck by them. They just didn't seem to live up to the standard that had previous been set. So when I learned that Anthony Horowitz was planning to write a novel about the famous detective himself I was conflicted yet hopeful. If anyone could carry on the work of Conan Doyle it was he.
And having just finished the book I find that it has lived up to expectations. The general plot is that Watson is nearing the end of his life and before he goes has decided to write out one case of Holmes' that never made it to print. However the country is at war (presumably the Second World War) and the scandal that publishing the case might cause would destabilise the government at precisely the wrong time. So once he finishes he will order the manuscript to be sealed away for the next hundred or so years, when society might be more able to cope with the scandal. The case was, naturally, the House of Silk. 
Now the real trouble here was to manage to create a scandal that really could have plausibly caused such shock, and I believe that Horowitz has managed to do that. The path to this conclusion is full of all we know and love about Holmes. In fact it really is all here, from the deducing of peoples professions to the Baker Street Irregulars. Even Moriarty makes an appearance. I might criticise it as trying to shove a lot of familiar items in to make us recognise and have a wave of nostalgia bear us through some parts of the story were it not all subtly woven into the plot in a way that made its inclusion natural and indeed necessary. Even through it was a good deal longer than all the other books, make no mistake; this was a Holmes novel in the best spirit of the thing.
However it wasn't perfect. My main problem with it was the trouble I had trying to place it on the timeline. It seemed to come at quiet a late point in Holmes and Watson's acquaintance and yet Moriarty is still on the scene. Though that might just be because it has been awhile since I read the originals. There was quite a lot of nostalgia used; Watson referring to previous cases a lot more than I remember him doing before. 
But It is a good book. A solid book. 
And a very entertaining read. I rate it at an eight out of ten and recommend that you buy it immediately. And here's the Amazon link so that you may do so.

Thursday, 29 December 2011

Angel by James Patterson - A Review

Why do I keep doing this to myself? Why do I keep reading books by this author when they drive me to distraction? Well I’ll get on to that later but in the meantime, as you might have guessed, I've got another James Patterson novel to review. This time it’s ‘Angel,’ the seventh in his Maximum Ride series.
Now I’m not entirely unbiased in this review. I didn’t come to this book expecting nothing of it. I firmly believe that the series should have stopped at the third book, ‘Saving the World and Other Extreme Sports.’ I don’t think that it should have continued past that.
And yet here we are. At number seven.
Well let’s take a look at it then.
First off the beginning is a bit naff. James Patterson’s standard opening for this series seems to be, ‘They were shot at. Chaos ensues.’ This is itself stupid but when the attack on them comes after getting in a plane with those who were trying to kill one of them last book you start banging your head off the wall. It is made borderline plausible later on but it’s still pretty dumb.
Then you have the main villains in the book. Again, there usually doesn’t seem much point to them after the third book, apart from a few that have just been randomly tacked on. But these ones really take the biscuit. For one thing they pick the sublimely subtle name of ‘The Doomsday Group,’ which was so under the radar that Fang decided that they were the enemy after seeing them on the Evening News. This group appear to worship Maximum Ride and all other mutations, which is odd considering they appear to try and kill them in the first fifty pages.
And then you have the style of writing. James Patterson seems to be trying to leave every chapter on a cliff-hanger. Which is fine in principle but when your chapters are only two pages or so long it kind of leaves everything a bit highly strung. And also some of the methods used to do this are out of place and unexplained. Bombs go off that seem to have no purpose what-so-ever. They get attacked by random people. More random people appear who might have some significance but then again might not. And so on.
Finally the ending. Is annoying. Period. It doesn’t make sense for one thing. The whole scheme sort of comes together but is nowhere near as big as expected. The continuality seems to go. At one point I swear that someone pops out of a hole, hits a few bad guys then jumps down the hole again. And more pointless drama.
So that’s the annoying things about it. Let’s look at what it does well.
Ok, the romance and the fighting.
Maximum Ride has always had fighting in it, with the Flock seeming to be able to take out literally hundreds of foes at a time. Happily this time is doesn’t seem to be quite so ridiculous and what fights there were had been done well. So that’s a point in its favour. And then the romance. Frankly this is what I usually get the books for anyway. Fang, the previous book, ended with such a sweet letter that it completely made up for all the other discrepancies that that book had had. So I was looking for a follow up in this book.
Did I get it? Sort of.
There was a fair bit of the soppy stuff in it but it seemed more muddled and half hearted. One of the problems I’ve had reading these books is that it seems very of the cliché American Teenager. Lots of high-fives and ‘dude!’s. That isn’t really anyone I know so I can’t really relate to it. So while the relationship stuff was alright it wasn’t great. Which kind of summarises the whole book really.
And yet, when the final one comes out in February I’m still going to buy it. Why?
Because I do actually like the premise. I like a lot of what goes into the books. I don’t think they’re very well done and they make me as annoyed as anything but in parts they’re still enjoyable to read. So I’m giving this a five out of ten and hoping that it gets better for the finale and that James Patterson clears up some of the many, many loose ends that he’s left lying around.
And if you want to buy the book, here’s the link: http://www.amazon.co.uk/Maximum-Ride-Angel-James-Patterson/dp/1846054664/ref=sr_1_4?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1325203974&sr=1-4
If you want to see my more off the cuff review then click this link here: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ibenoRw5lgM&feature=mfu_in_order&list=UL

Saturday, 3 December 2011

I survived. Somehow

So it's now December and NaNoWriMo is now over. And I made it, if only just. Still I'm proud of what I achieved. It was, however, very last minute. As you can see if the picture that will hopefully be included in this post.

Anyway, that's what I've been doing for the past month. Now let's look at the next one.
I'm going to focus primarily on my studies as there's a very real danger that I might not make it into university. And I want to make it to uni, so that I can get some good degrees and therefore get a job that'll let me do writing for a living. As I'm basically bone-idle lazy this means I'll have to take a good look at how I use my time and shape up quite a lot. This means that I probably won't be able to go back to the whole 'write-one-story-per-week' thing.
However I don't want to let this blog just die. I enjoy it too much. So I'm going to be working on something else for it and should have two of these things up for Christmas. Hopefully.
If I don't get kicked out of school first.