Thursday 25 October 2012

The Words. They come for me.

I am shattered so I'm going to make this very quick.

My schedule seems to have got very full very quickly. NaNoWriMo starts on Thursday and I'm planning on entering it. Before that happens I want to have got last year's novel, which I think its ok and might actually be publishable, into a good enough state to send off to some friends for editing. I'm currently in the 'improve what you've got' part and will shortly start on the 'add in as many words as you can.' This part is important because my book is currently only 168 or so pages long. And it needs to be much, much, longer. So I've got to write about 16,000 more words.

But that's not all! I've also got four, count em, four competitions that have to be finished at about the same time. I have to enter these because I have still to get a job and though I'm managing perfectly well at the moment eventually I will need money. And they offer money. So I'd like to enter them. But if I submit each story with the max amount of words I'll need to have written 23,500 words plus 40 lines of poetry before NaNoWriMo begins. Which, might I remind you, is Thursday.

Also on Thursday is my creative writing class. I have to also submit a short story for them, running to no more than 2,000 words which brings us up to a grand total of 25,500 words in the next five days. Which works out to about 5,100 words a day. Plus 40 lines of poetry.

I am so not going to sleep any time soon.

There's other news. What was it? Oh yes.

I'm in yet another competition! Because of eating and stuff. How I managed to finally get into it is a story in itself but one for another time. In this one a short story of mine plus a dozen or so others has been published (yay) on a mobile app. The one who has the most downloads before Halloween wins. The app is free and called Ether Books. You have to be on a iPhone or an iPad to get it. Android users might also be able to acquire it but that remains unconfirmed. Once you have the app you search for my name (Alexander McCall) and my short story should come up. It should look like this.


If you download it then it'll be one more step towards me being a published author and fairies will clean your dishes. Or something.

I am actually starting to see sentences highlighted in yellow floating in front of my eyes so I'll stop now and go to bed. It's going to be a long few days.

Monday 22 October 2012

Pumpkins

I haven't posted anything in a wee while so I thought I'd throw together a blog post, just to make it look like this is actually an active blog. Also I fell asleep at five o'clock, woke up at midnight and now I can't get back to sleep.
A fair amount has been happening to me lately, though not much that I can post on here. I've been trying to write some stories for some competitions but I'm a bit rusty. To solve this I've decided to enter NaNoWriMo again this year. It's only eight or so days away and I don't know what I'm doing yet but it's not like that's stopped me in the past. I've also been working on last years NaNoNovel. It's actually looking not too bad, though very rough and ready. I'm planning to get it into a better state before starting the next one. Then again I plan a lot of things so who knows what will actually happen.
Although I don't have much chance to get books these days I do have a copy of Oblivion by Anthony Horowitz. However I've not really got into it yet. Mostly it's because it was so long since I've read the others in the series that I'm having trouble remembering who is who and what exactly happened. There's also the issue that the setting for this book is very different to the others. I'm going to get round to it eventually but it's not exactly been compelling me to read and I have other things to do.
On the subject of books, though I don't think we're ever off the subject on this blog, I've just been published again. In the Spring I entered a poetry competition with a prize of £1000. While I didn't win that, and honestly the winning poem about chickens was so good I don't care, I did get published in the anthology. It's called 'Animal Antics 2012' and while not quite as prestigious as Poetry Rivals it's still nice to once again be in print.
As a last piece of news filming just finished today on a short film for a university project. I mention this because I wrote the script (and was the general errand boy but that's not as prestigious.) The video still needs to be edited and put up on a YouTube channel, the name of which has not yet been decided, but it was still pretty amazing to see everything coming together. Hopefully there will be other videos in the future but for now I'm delighted in what we've achieved. When it is uploaded I will link it for your general perusal.
I think I'm finally feeling tired again so with that I bid you goodnight.

Wednesday 10 October 2012

The Mark of Athena by Rick Riordan - A Review

Ah, the time has finally arrived. A new Percy Jackson book has appeared and much is the rejoicing across the land.
Ok, that might be over egging it a bit but it is roughly how I feel. There's very little you can say about the series that is bad (as long as you don't mention the movie. Never mention the movie.) You have a bunch of teenagers who run around with swords and fight monsters. You have well told myths and legends as a background. You get Greek gods who appear occasionally and either help or muck everything up. It's brilliant.
And it's well done. That's the important thing. You can have any amount of myths and legends but usually they're just a few well known ones that still seem a bit dated, no matter when it's based. With the Percy Jackson series they're all given modern context and this allows you to engage with them at a whole new level.
I should probably stop rambling on about how great the series is in general and focus on the book. Obviously if you haven't read any of the books prior to 'The Mark of Athena,' then stop reading this review now, go out and buy them. There will be spoilers for them, which just makes sense, considering that this is the eighth in the series.
When last we left our heroes it was all about to kick off. Percy had just been proclaimed Praetor and the Greeks and Jason were coming in their flying battleship to parlay. The epic quest to journey to Greece was about to get underway.
In other words there was a lot of expectation for this book to live up to. And I think it mostly managed.
There are a few things that might cause people some problems. There are seven demigods on the quest but we only see from the perspective of four of them; Annabeth, Leo, Piper and Percy. In that order. Which means that we don't see things from Percy's viewpoint, the main character of the first five books, until page 152. We don't get to see anything from the point of view of Jason, Hazel and Frank. This is quite a shame as they're supposed to be the Romans and this is the journey that takes them to Rome. So we see Rome through Greek eyes. This is probably on purpose but I really doubt that we're getting a Romans only book next time.
I also didn't find it as upbeat as it usually is. The Percy Jackson series often has problems solved in frankly ridiculous way or some light humour thrown in, like the karpoi offering everyone grain. There was some of that but all in all it was a more serious book.
That's the only criticisms that I can think of and to be honest I'm not even sure that they're criticisms rather than observations. Annabeth was slightly annoying at the start when she was missing Percy but that was quickly solved. Honestly I think the only reason I have an objection to that is because, since reading 'Twilight,' almost any romance seems off to me. The plot was fast paced and there were no obvious holes. The Greek and Roman legends were again used to great effect. And the combat was interesting.
Best of all there's going to be a sequel. Once again I'd thought that this was going to be the last in a series and I've been proved wrong. I have no idea when the next book will come out but I'm really looking forward to it.
All in all, I'm giving this book a nine out of ten.
And if you want to buy it, which I would recommend, the Amazon link is here: http://www.amazon.co.uk/Heroes-Olympus-The-Mark-Athena/dp/0141335742/ref=sr_1_1?ie=UTF8&qid=1349879642&sr=8-1

Friday 5 October 2012

The Sacrifice by Charlie Higson - A Review.


It took a while for my local bookshop to get copies so it was about a week after the book was released that I actually managed to get my hand on 'The Sacrifice,' the latest book in 'The Enemy' series by Charlie Higson. This is one series that I really enjoy. Set in London it's got zombies, the only people left alive are children and they all get killed in really brutal ways. It's great. The previous three books all started by following one main character and also showing events from the point of view of a few others. And at some point these main characters all died, further enforcing the point that no one was safe.
This book follows that same narrative structure (though I'm not going to tell you if the main character dies or not.) The web of people relating what's happening has spread, so you're getting a wider picture than you were in the previous books, where most of the characters joined up in some way. Higson has also decided to relate the cause of the outbreak. Sort of. Before we had the kids hypothesizing all the different reasons that the zombies could have come about, which ranged from government tests to global warming. It was actually pretty entertaining and I think that that ignorance was good. It reinforced that these are children and that they don't naturally know everything. I don't think we needed to know why the zombies were here or why they act in a particular way. But whatever. We're being given a reason so there you go.
Not, of course, that it's as easy as 'This is what happens.' By the end of the book you still don't know exactly what's going on, though you can probably make a pretty accurate guess. And this is another facet of ‘The Enemy’ series. You're left wondering what happened a lot of the time.
Let me explain. The first book in the series is The Enemy. It has a perfectly normal linear timeline, going from point A to point B. It ends at a bit of a cliffhanger but that just leaves you looking forward to the next book. However the next book, 'The Dead,' is a prequel, set a year before 'The Enemy' and featuring almost completely different characters. It expands the general background of the story and lets you know a small bit about one or two of the characters that appeared in 'The Enemy.' Then the third book, 'The Fear,' is a continuation of one of the characters from 'The Dead.' It happens about a year after the second book but about a week or so before the start of 'The Enemy.' It continues on, again involving some of the secondary characters from the other two books who are beginning to get pretty central and involved, and ends at roughly the same point as 'The Enemy.' This should leave us with another nice linear book, which can tie up all the previous points and round everything off nicely. I was fully expecting 'The Sacrifice,' to be the last in the series.
But no. Instead 'The Sacrifice' starts eight days after 'The Fear,' ends. It is, as I think I said, a more widely spread novel so we see roughly three different story lines as different groups go hither and yon. Again, we get people from the previous books and again the world is expanded nicely. But we don't go anywhere near the group from the first book and we're still left on the cliffhanger of what happened to them, a cliffhanger that has lasted through three separate books. That has to be some sort of record. I think that the next book will be the last and tie everything up but for all I know Charlie Higson could be slowly trolling us and the next book will be set in Paris two years in the future. I wouldn't put it past him.
Don't get me wrong. It's a really good, effective way to tell the story. We get to see each character from several different points of view, can emphasize with almost everyone and understand why they're doing it. It's made the cliffhanger bigger in fact as we know more about what that group will be facing. But I just what to know what happens next.
While I have said that all of the books are quite violent, and they really are, this is definitely the tamest of the lot. In 'The Enemy' the characters had survived for a year and so were pretty tough but there were a lot of dangers out there and a lot of people died. In 'The Dead,' the outbreak had only just happened so everyone was pretty inexperienced and a lot more people died. 'The Fear' was just a bloodbath from start to finish and I would really recommend not eating anything while reading the first fifty or so pages. (Take it from someone who knows. It's a really bad idea.) But 'The Sacrifice,' although a fair amount of people do die, is nothing compared to the others, especially 'The Fear.' I'm not sure why, whether Higson just didn't have as many characters that he wanted to kill off or whether he got a lot of complaint letters from parents about their children not sleeping after reading the last one. For whatever reason I'd say that the age rating could be a whole two years younger on this one than the others. Make of that what you will.
However for all that this is still a really good book. The characters are interesting and engaging, the story is well thought out, with a possible exception to the cause of the disease (But he hasn't fully explained it yet so I'm withholding judgement) and the details are suitably gory. So I heartily recommend this series and this book with a 7 out of 10 rating.